Wikipedia:WikiProject India/Peer review/Mangalore

Mangalore
This article has been drastically improved and meets most of the standards of Wikipedia. A peer review is required on this article. All are requested to participate.-->>Kensplanet (talk) 07:13, 6 March 2008 (UTC)

I have gone thru the article:-
 * The economy para has lots of nonsense. plz remove nonsense. write a economy in mangalore article and put all details there. here keep only key details.....write only a single para
 * similarly for civic admin
 * put lang & rel in demography and merge cuisine with culture
 * transport is too big . plz reduce. write a whole section without subdiivisions/ only key points. write a article transport in mlr and put all details thereWpinman (talk) 14:22, 17 March 2008 (UTC)

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I have gone thru the article:- -Done. Trivia from this section deleted.---Kensplanet (talk) 14:27, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * The economy para has lots of nonsense. plz remove nonsense. write a economy in mangalore article and put all details there. here keep only key details.....write only a single para
 * Done. Economy section reduced. Main article has been put up there.---Kensplanet (talk) 14:27, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * similarly for civic admin
 * put lang & rel in demography and merge cuisine with culture
 * Comment. No, Language and Religion cannot be put under Demographics. Demographics is reserves for only those points for which numbers (figures) can be provided. But Cuisine will be merged with Culture.---Kensplanet (talk) 14:55, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
 * transport is too big . plz reduce. write a whole section without subdiivisions/ only key points. write a article transport in mlr and put all details there
 * Done. Innecessary info deleted---Kensplanet (talk) 14:27, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

Wpinman (talk) 14:22, 17 March 2008 (UTC)