Wikipedia:WikiProject India/Peer review/S. P. Balasubrahmanyam

S. P. Balasubrahmanyam
Article has been cleaned up and expanded few months ago. Deserves atleast a C-class. Thalapathi  (Ping Back)  11:37, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

Comments from Ravichandar84


 * The textual part of the article is extremely small. Most of the article is made of lists. Please expand the textual part a bit more.
 * As per WP:MOS, the lead section should completely summarize the article.
 * Sources are extremely few. Claims like "Balasubrahmanyan has a daughter Pallavi and a son S. P. B. Charan" should be properly sourced.
 * Sources should be reliable. I am not sure if Aristopia.com, Networkbase.info and 600024.com are reliable. It will be better if you consult someone about the sources. Meanwhile, I feel that most of the links you have added to "Futher reading" can be used as sources for further expansion of the article.
 * Done

If atleast two or three of these concerns are addressed, I think the article should be good enough for a C-class. Regards. - The Enforcer Office of the secret service 12:38, 2 May 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Ravi!! Even I was thinking of using the links which are used in "External links" as sources. There is still a lot to deal with article. -- Thalapathi  (Ping Back)  13:31, 2 May 2011 (UTC)


 * No, not "External Links"! I am referring to "Further reading" section.- The Enforcer Office of the secret service 14:12, 2 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Yeah I was referring to "Further Reading" section. Just a small confusion. -- Thalapathi  (Ping Back)  15:42, 2 May 2011 (UTC)