Wikipedia:WikiProject India/Peer review/West Bengal National University of Juridical Sciences

West Bengal National University of Juridical Sciences
Hello everyone, please put forward suggestions to improve the article on NUJS Legaleagle86 07:31, 15 November 2006 (UTC)

The article seems to be too long. You might need to work on keeping the information short and crisp, about 60% of the current length should do fine. ­ &#2384; Kris (&#9742; talk | contribs) 18:30, 23 November 2006 (UTC)

Thank you srkris for your suggestion, but can more specific changes be pointed out.Legaleagle86 14:38, 28 November 2006 (UTC)


 * In my opinion, there are many sentences that need to be re-written from scratch. For example, the philosophy section is all flowery and doesn't contribute to the article in an encyclopedic way. Instead of writing what are the objectives and vision of the institute, write what the institute DID, and back it by reliable sources other than university's own publications. The Vice Chancellor section needs to be scrapped as it is useless. The whole section on faculty needs to be re-written. Instead of writing about individual faculty, write a general discussion on what is the faculty strength, what are the facilities provided to them, etc. — Ambuj Saxena (☎) 10:15, 8 January 2007 (UTC)