Wikipedia:WikiProject Indonesia/Peer review/Toraja

Toraja
Guys, I've made a lot of changes in this article, but this article really requires more than 1 contributor to have neutral views and also, as I'm not a native English person, I need somebody else to check grammar consistencies, as well as spelling. Any critics, suggestions and direct editing is very welcome and I really appreciate it. Thanks a lot in advance. &mdash; Indon ( reply ) &mdash; 04:41, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
 * I wish I could give suggestions and recommendations. But my english is not better than yours, so, umm, ahahahah, I'm afraid I'll make the article worse. Above all, it looks great for me. Good work! Cheers -- 10:10, 10 September 2006 (UTC)
 * C'mon, I've made so many grammar mistakes. Thanks that somebody corrected it. Anyway, thanks. &mdash; Indon ( reply ) &mdash; 11:23, 10 September 2006 (UTC)