Wikipedia:WikiProject Latter Day Saint movement/Articles to Cleanup

These Latter Day Saint movement articles are in need of some cleanup. Please read through them and make sure to remove any errors.

Articles

 * Kirtland Temple. CO GDEN  21:43, Nov 29, 2004 (UTC) I started to fill this one out a week or so ago and added a picture I took of it. --John Hamer 05:03, 26 Jan 2005 (UTC)
 * The Word of the Lord Brought to Mankind by an Angel - Hard to understand and POV problems.
 * Otto Fetting - POV, long blockquote. Cool Hand Luke (Communicate!)  00:42, 17 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * Jack Mormon - Short, icky, irrelevent, and doesn't explain interesting origin of the term.
 * Jerald and Sandra Tanner - It needs some fixins, dude.
 * Many articles - Make name of church consistent The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints - see talk
 * Bulk of these done, but I'm bound to have missed a few. Alai 05:58, 11 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Jeff Lindsay. I don't know much about online apologists, but this page strangely seems to cover only Lindsay's day job. Also, it has a NPOV flag for some reason. Cool Hand Luke  12:50, 7 Mar 2005 (UTC)
 * This one makes me uneasy. It looks like a place for self promotion. Since there are no specifics about his apologetic work, particularly from peers, and just hyping of his blog/website, I think we have to ask why it should remain. --Blainster 09:15, 13 Mar 2005 (UTC)
 * But I am sure the article wasn't written by him. He is a web legend and has history.  The article probably has merit since he (with David Bowie) is one of the firsts.  Tom Haws 19:10, Mar 14, 2005 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I now don't suggest a listing of him is inappropriate, just its current expression. I tried make it a little more neutral, and will leave it for someone more knowledgeable to expand on his work. --Blainster 19:23, 14 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * Kolob - an anon. just added a block of material to this article. I did a quick edit and softened the POV a little, but please look it over for balance and confirmation of his/her information.  WBardwin 05:54, 24 Apr 2005 (UTC)