Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Completed Articles Archive/July 2007


 * 1) East 17-copy editing completed, just needs a read-through to make sure it's clear and makes sense. Thanks! QueenFrstine06 01:48, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ proofread completed with a few minor corrections and spellcheck.Gprince007 12:14, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Counts of Manderscheid Was a rough translation, hopefully better now. Cricketgirl 14:27, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅proofread finished with addition of one or two dropped words. I changed one awkward sentence also. QueenFrstine06 14:57, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Burghausen, Altötting I copyedited this from and think it is now ready for proviso-free inclusion in English Wikipedia. Cricketgirl 12:35, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ Checked dates of War of Bavarian Succession, which someone had a question on, with Encyclopaedia Brittanica. Made some minor grammar and parallel structure edits. It looks ready to me! QueenFrstine06 15:23, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Plymouth Colony. Was "under progress" for several months while I extensively harvested my nose of buggers.
 * ✅ Only a few minor changes were needed throughout. Otheus 16:24, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) New Croton Dam - Copyediting done. Needs proofreading. Finetooth 03:58, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ Made minor changes to punctuation and presentation of numerical values.  Also moved an image to fix text wrap issue. Staceyburz 14:46, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) DR Class 250 - this had a rough translation tag, I've had a look at it. I commented out a sentence about "cannibalistic trains" in the History section - see the talk page. Not very long. Cricketgirl 10:45, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ Made minor grammatical changes and reworked opening sentence for clarity. Fixed "cannibalistic" sentence. SlackerMom 13:33, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Dekh Bhai Dekh-copyedit done....very short article....Gprince007 08:45, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ I have proofed this article, although I think it sounds dangerously close to an advertisement. I did remove the POV closing sentence, but it could probably use more work by someone familiar with the topic. SlackerMom 17:28, 23 July 2007 (UTC)