Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Completed Articles Archive/June 2007

June 2007

 * 1) Synoptic Gospels --Otheus 14:15, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ Made some clarifications, esp. to sentence fluency in regards to comma use. beverson 03:38, 18 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Sümerbank - I had NO idea what this article was trying to say. Did the best that I could.  The Hippie  22:01, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ nothing to change. Cricketgirl 21:10, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Lenny McLean I worked extensively on this one today and just would like somebody else to give it a once-over and make sure I didn't miss anything. At this point I've been staring at it for so long I don't think I would see a mistake if it was right in front of me. Trusilver 05:18, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ only a few tiny changes, also called for citations. Cricketgirl 21:10, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Cressy, Victoria - Copyedited. There was only minor typos and I reworked some grammar. --Edsmaffs 07:25, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ some rearrangement. Cricketgirl 21:36, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Touch the Clouds - A very short article, but it was extremely confusing to me. Forgive me if I missed some mistakes. I did not know what the article was trying to say.  The Hippie  01:55, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ did a few more little edits, but now fine. Cricketgirl 21:36, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) My Wife and Kids --Otheus 11:56, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ Cricketgirl 21:36, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Eskimo shamanism obscure topic, did the best i could Jollyjoegiant 04:09, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅Proofread & made a few tweaks. Removed the tag, but some of the tenses may still need work! EyeSereneTALK 12:13, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) 100 Grand Bar - Copyedited the Cultural references section. Ready for proofreading --Edsmaffs 17:11, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
 * ✅ proofread completed with a few minor correctionsGprince007 15:51, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Continuation War I think this is ready for proof. Navou   banter  04:43, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
 * ❌ This article has not only been on the list for ages, but is the subject of ongoing contentious editing - can't find any signs of the original copyedit. EyeSereneTALK 09:12, 26 June 2007 (UTC)