Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Completed Articles Archive/March 2007

March 2007

 * 1) Drop shipping: A short article about retail and wholesaling. Mr.Z-man  talk ¢ 00:33, 24 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *Placed a comment in its Talk page about possibly hyphenating the title and appropriate terms within. Unimaginative Username 04:44, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) **✅ Did not hyphenate because concensus has not been reached. Galena11 19:01, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Mimic (comics) Might need some polishing, but I think it's good to go.Konczewski 22:34, 28 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) *✅ Dvandersluis 19:31, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) The Black Parade - Recently just failed it's first GA nomination. Was suggested to be submitted here for help. I have tried to help this article out, however, I think I could use some more help as it was stated in the GA failed comment that it had prose and redundancy problems. Orfen  User Talk | Contribs 00:55, 20 January 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) *I copyedited this, but have since become heavily involved in it, so I don't feel comfortable being the one to proofread it and slap the done tag on it. --Moralis 06:24, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) **✅ I added a couple of new ref tags and cited some issues in hidden comments in the text.  See edit history for details.  Galena11 20:23, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) Iraklis: was in bad shape this morning. This is my first major copyedit in a long time. Please let me know if it's about finished. --Moralis
 * 10) *✅ Looked pretty good, only made minor changes. Galena11 21:00, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) Heinrich Quincke: An auto-translated article from WikiGermany that started out rough but should be OK now. Galena11 21:22, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) *I just made some minor grammatical corrections. It looks good to me now. Croberts1 05:17, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) **✅ Croberts1 05:20, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) Lords of the Realm II This article was in terrible shape.  This is my first proofread, so I appreciate any comments and suggestions.  Thanks!  --Croberts1 04:48, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 15) * ✅ Nice job on the c/e, Croberts1! Just did some cleanup to eliminate wordiness, reordered sections to make sense (e.g., the Overview was at the bottom, moved it to top) etc. Galena11 23:37, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) Frank Sindone: Philadelphia mobster and murderer. Galena11 18:51, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 17) *✅I corrected a couple minor grammatical mistakes. This looks done to me.Croberts1 04:10, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) Mako (dance): A Tongan dance. Short. Galena11 21:22, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 19) *✅ Looks good.Croberts1 18:37, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) The Boy in the Box (Vidal, California) Listed by Wikipedia as needing fixing, I think it's all set.LittleNuccio 02:28, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 21) Arms and Equipment Guide This looks pretty good; it's ready for a proof.Croberts1 01:58, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 22) *✅ Fixed up the headings, a bit of wikilinking, etc. &mdash;Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 20:38, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 23) Pokémon Trading Figure Game This is a short article that needs expanding, but it might as well be correct in the meantime.Croberts1 05:01, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 24) *✅ Replaced the infobox, organized lists into a table &mdash;Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 21:35, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 25) Cricket World Cup — Currently a Featured Article Candidate. I feel that the quality of the prose is not up to mark, and there is also marked variation in writing style because of numerous contributors. May require light–medium copyedit. — Ambuj Saxena (☎) 06:58, 22 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Note this is no longer an FAC and was promoted recently as a matter of fact it's due on the main page March 13, 2007. I would remove it from here but I'm not a member of the league and don't know the policies. Quadzilla99 01:09, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Moved to completed section. Galena11 23:09, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Robert E. Lee High School (Jacksonville) The high school where Lynard Skynard was first formed, didn't need a lot.  Mr.Z-man  talk ¢ Review! 02:04, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) *✅ Added a bit of wikilinking, reformatted the reference to use a cite template. Otherwise good! &mdash;Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 15:13, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Download This Song Article on a single by MC Lars. It didn't need too much work, though I did redo one section which was quite, umm, confusing. Should be good to go now. Searles2sels (PJ) 03:08, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) *✅ Needed a bit of work, especially with the links. Also, I reorganized it better into sections. &mdash;Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 16:12, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) 2002 Mombasa hotel bombing Copyedit and fact-check (against Reference articles only).~ Otterpops 17:11, 22 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) *✅ Galena11 20:22, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Place Branding Also wikified - needs proofread and red-link removal --Wavemaster447 20:11, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) *✅ Galena11 20:41, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) Event Driven Architecture: Don't get it. Rintrah 07:46, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
 * I can't find flaws with this one, but I'm not yet comfortable with the style. --Sigma 7 19:47, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Ready for final? --Sigma 7 02:18, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) *✅ Galena11 20:53, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Monte Ne This article just needs a few once overs to root out some continuity and grammatical errors. --The_stuart 14:54, 23 January 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) *Isn't a few once-overs actually a thrice-over? :-) Rintrah 17:34, 23 January 2007 (UTC)
 * I've given it one once over. Trishm 01:38, 24 January 2007 (UTC)
 * Not if a few different people look over it once ;-)--The_stuart 15:04, 24 January 2007 (UTC)
 * More cleanup. Looks like all it needs now is a proof...any takers? Galena11 21:30, 10 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Looks good on a quick pass. --Sigma 7 17:22, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) *✅ --Sigma 7 13:46, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) Open air concert This one was quite a piece of work - I think it was bot-translated. Gave it a very thorough re-writing, and now it needs a second eye.  Hillbillygirl 10:59, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) *✅ minor tweaks and added a reference tag MarkBuckles (talk) 08:38, 19 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) Askam and Ireleth Recently promoted to good article status will need boosting up if it wants to be a featured article; a copyedit to start things off would be good. --Robdurbar 11:54, 25 January 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) *Sorry, forgot to note that I c/e'd this on 28 February. Galena11 18:12, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) *✅ Gave it another read through, and a few (very) minor changes. I must say, I love this article - it's thorough and interesting! Hillbillygirl 22:52, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) Canals in Cheshire: Pretty straightforward. Galena11 17:27, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) *✅ Hillbillygirl 09:38, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) Brooks-Baxter War: up to Factionalism within the Republican Party. Rintrah 05:30, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) *I copy-edited up to Crisis. Budding Journalist 06:59, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) **Ready for proof. Budding Journalist 01:40, 9 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) * ✅ Hillbillygirl 10:27, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) Coat of arms of Nabram: Polish coat of arms. Short. Galena11 17:58, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) *I looked this over and made a couple minor grammatical corrections; however, I am uncomfortable placing it in the "done" category right now because I am not very familiar with the topic.Croberts1 04:10, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 15) **✅ &mdash;Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 14:45, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) American Psycho - My friends, I want your help on this article. Make mr. Happy happy again. Rintrah 18:48, 23 January 2007 (UTC)
 * 17) *You asked for it, you got it. :o) I put quite a few notes in about content that didn't make sense to me. I also only lightly c/e'ed the Themes and Symbolism section, due to its "unverified/original research" tag. Galena11 16:28, 10 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) **I should also note that this article inspired me to create my first disambiguation page. So, a check to make sure I did that correctly would be appreciated. Galena11 16:32, 10 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 19) ***The disambiguation page looks good; so good, in fact, I'm going to nominate it for Featured disambiguation. Anyway, thanks so much for your help! Mr. Happy is happy now. :o) Rintrah 16:42, 10 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) ****✅ No more visible flaws (aside from potential OR). --Sigma 7 03:22, 26 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 21) Josef Wallnig - Please excuse me if I missed a lot of mistakes; my copyediting is pretty poor nowadays... Peace, ♣ Tohru Honda13  ♣ 03:13, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 22) *very short article. I don't think there's really much more that can be done, with the tiny amount of material! Cricketgirl 15:45, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 23) **✅ just referencing to be done on this now. Cricketgirl 19:10, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 24) Kebayoran Baru residential district in Jakarta, Indonesia. Short. Hillbillygirl 10:27, 16 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 25) *Have proofread this, looks OK now. More references would be nice, but this is not a c-editing problem... Cricketgirl 15:54, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 26) **✅ Cricketgirl 19:10, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 27) Plaza Galerias Pachuca Otterpops 17:51, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 28) *Have proofread this, looks fine to me. It asks for more wikification, but I can't see where this is necessary. Cricketgirl 17:57, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
 * 29) **✅ just referencing to be done on this now, and the requested wikification (still don't see where...). Cricketgirl 19:10, 31 March 2007 (UTC)