Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Completed Articles Archive/November 2006


 * Imogene Coca Trusilver 02:12, 18 November 2006 (UTC) Proofed by --  J A X HERE   |  Pre vari cate at me  14:47, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Festival do Sudoeste Trusilver 02:12, 18 November 2006 (UTC)--  J A X HERE   |  Pre vari cate at me  15:35, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Volga Tatars Trusilver 02:53, 18 November 2006 (UTC) - Rintrah 09:06, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Gábor Csupó Trusilver 02:12, 18 November 2006 (UTC) - Rintrah 09:14, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Humayun Ahmed Trusilver 02:12, 18 November 2006 (UTC) - Rintrah 09:36, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Tanjong Trusilver 04:12, 18 November 2006 (UTC) - Rintrah 09:43, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Eslamshahr (translated from a weird, foreign dialect of English) Rintrah - Trusilver 21:27, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Hylotheism Rintrah 13:40, 19 November 2006 (UTC) - Trusilver 23:56, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Dhaular Rintrah 10:21, 19 November 2006 (UTC)--  J A X HERE   |  Pre vari cate at me  04:38, 20 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Le Corniaud Trusilver 21:32, 19 November 2006 (UTC) Rintrah 14:27, 20 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Where the Red Fern Grows Trusilver 22:43, 19 November 2006 (UTC) Rintrah 14:38, 20 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Frank Jonkman Rintrah 11:37, 19 November 2006 (UTC)"> J A X HERE   16:08, 20 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Albert Barillé (Original version was confusing. I don't know if I copyedited it right.) Rintrah 08:31, 19 November 2006 (UTC) - It seems okay to me, although the word usage seems a little peculiar. I'm looking into the quote, though. Trusilver 19:51, 20 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Corporate Promoter requires the skills of someone who can interpret legalese better than I can. Trusilver 23:44, 19 November 2006 (UTC) Done, see the talk page. -- J A X HERE  |  T a l k  01:57, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Zoroaster (It's given me a literal headache. Since this one is marked to go into the print Wikipedia, it really should be double-checked.) IrisWings 07:54, 21 November 2006 (UTC) Checked. It is well written. You did a good job. Rintrah 08:36, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Troll Doll Trusilver 07:38, 21 November 2006 (UTC) Rintrah 08:47, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Mythology This was a major rework - please review JAXHERE | Talk 16:39, 20 November 2006 (UTC); I cleaned up a bit more. Maybe one more person wants to take a look? IrisWings 21:34, 21 November 2006 (UTC) I took one last shot at it, I think it's pretty good. Trusilver 05:00, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Gunston Middle School Rintrah 15:12, 21 November 2006 (UTC) - Trusilver 03:34, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Cee-lo Rintrah 15:17, 20 November 2006 (UTC) - Trusilver 03:34, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Jessica's Law - Someone take a look at the 'criticism' section. I think I have cleaned it up pretty good, but I would like a second opinion. Trusilver 03:23, 24 November 2006 (UTC) Second opinion: you cleaned it up well. The article is successfully copyedited. Rintrah 18:09, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Luis Aguilé - I've copy-edited the entire thing, fixing typos and rearranging sentences. I'd like someone to check if it's all right.  K yo cat  ¿Qué tal?•meow! 03:42, 25 November 2006 (UTC) I have made all the changes I saw fit. It's finished now. Rintrah 04:04, 25 November 2006 (UTC)Thank you very much.  K  yo cat  ¿Qué tal?•meow! 04:08, 25 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Extended Super Frame Rintrah 14:41, 21 November 2006 (UTC) - Trusilver 07:28, 25 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Jelena Karleuša  Michaelas10   (Talk)   09:12, 25 November 2006 (UTC) Rintrah 14:58, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Youth Theatre Very short; just needs a once-over. IrisWings 08:37, 29 November 2006 (UTC). Done. Rintrah 08:44, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Change agent . This article seems rather silly, and I am not sure if I have made it express the original authors ideas. Rintrah 14:52, 27 November 2006 (UTC) The topic of this article seems like rubbish, but your version is more intelligible than any previous one. :P IrisWings 08:58, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Christmas at the Tipton Rintrah 02:26, 29 November 2006 (UTC) Looks good to me. IrisWings 08:58, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Christianity in Italy Rintrah 02:26, 29 November 2006 (UTC) Done. IrisWings 09:35, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Electric inductive coil Rintrah 20:08, 24 November 2006 (UTC) I proof-read it already. | A ndonic O Talk 17:35, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Hindu philosophy Can someone please give this article the once-over for spelling and grammar? I think I've pretty much taken care of the rest of it.SFinside 14:11, 26 November 2006 (UTC) Great job on a very esoteric article. :) IrisWings 20:42, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Coolie Trusilver 01:12, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
 * I just did a bunch more work on that one. Still needs work; see article's talk page, esp. about how article says term is derogatory, then constantly uses the word as if it were neutral (imagine the article on the word "nigger" being written that way!)  I've removed the WikiProject tag from the top of the Talk page, since the job is definitely not done, and it looks bad to say we've edited it when it is still in this state... &mdash;  SMcCandlish &#91;talk&#93; &#91;contrib&#93; ツ 11:45, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Tried to clean it up a bit more. I think I've mitigated the offensiveness; the word has to be used a few times in the article for clarity, but I got rid of the rest. IrisWings 04:13, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
 * This seems OK now although there is still lots of room for content improvement. "Coolie" is commonly used in scholarly historical articles; it's only offensive when used for people today, and is in common use in India as shown by the links. --Espoo 17:29, 1 December 2006 (UTC)


 * Balikpapan. I have done most of the article, but there are some sections I don't know how to edit: the second paragraph of Airport is confusing, and Kariangau Industrial Zones has content which is either poorly written or shouldn't be there at all. Rintrah 23:37, 20 November 2006 (UTC)
 * This was a nightmare, still want someone to give this one more check. Trusilver 06:28, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
 * I've corrected a lot of language problems and done some copyediting and deleting of illogical parts, but it's still a nightmare because most of what it contains is unsourced and much of it is still unclear. I'm tempted to add because there is no way of knowing what some parts mean without understanding the original that it was obviously translated from, http://id.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kota_Balikpapan. I made a request for help at the Indonesian talk page. --Espoo 02:20, 30 November 2006 (UTC)