Wikipedia:WikiProject Louisville/Peer review/SHPS

SHPS
I would like t o get this article to good article or status and I am sort of stuck. Any input would be greatly sppreciated. M-BMor 03:18, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
 * It looks like it needs inline citations. ShadowHalo 20:23, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Added intext ref. Thanks for the feedback M-BMor 21:11, 12 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 23:58, 17 May 2007 (UTC)

Some suggestions: Thank you.&mdash; RJH (talk) 16:38, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
 * The article reads like it was written by a publicity firm. Isn't there any criticism or impartial coverage of this firm?
 * There seem to be a lot of inappropriate capitalizations of words. E.g. "...including Large market...", "...include Health plans...", "...Though Based in...", &c.
 * More wikilinks are needed.
 * It's Colmes, not Combs.
 * The inline citations should use proper cite templates and be placed following punctuation marks.


 * Thank you corrected colmes, moved the cites behind punctuation, wikilinked some more things. Trying to make it sound more "encyclopedic"..M-BMor 17:54, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
 * The expansion of the history section would be great, and some expansion/citing on the locations would help as well.-- Wizardman 03:08, 11 June 2007 (UTC)