Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Anti-Fascist Council for the National Liberation of Yugoslavia

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Anti-Fascist Council for the National Liberation of Yugoslavia
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I am nominating this article for A-Class review because I believe it is close to complying with A-class criteria and would like to receive feedback allowing further improvements to the article. Thanks Tomobe03 (talk) 12:46, 14 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Support I reviewed this at GA and am satisfied it meets A-class standards. -Indy beetle (talk) 06:45, 12 November 2021 (UTC)

Drive-by from CPA

 * There are some MOS:SANDWICH issues in the First session section. Please remove this issues. Cherers. CPA-5 (talk) 16:14, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments from Buidhe
I did a general copyedit of the article. Hopefully I have not accidentally introduced any Americanisms. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  10:06, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
 * "It lost three Croatian Peasant Party (HSS) ministers including the party's leader and the deputy prime minister Vladko Maček, who resigned and stayed in the country. The HSS thus split and lost influence." Does the who clause apply just to Macek or all three? Also, why is the HSS split relevant to the Avnoj? If the point of these sentences is to highlight the narrow basis and weak legitimacy of the exile government, it's enough just to say that the 3 HSS and 1 Muslim minister resigned.
 * "In combination with fear of communism, this led him to ignore information about Chetnik collaboration with the Axis powers, and appoint their leader Draža Mihailović the Minister of the Army, Navy and Air Forces." This sentence needs to be rewritten as I'm not clear what it's trying to say.

Vami
Reserving a spot. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  11:16, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
 * User:Vami IV Tomobe03 has not edited since mid-January just FYI. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  01:19, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
 * That is not good, very bad news. I hope they are okay. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  03:35, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

Coordinator comment
With Tomobe having gone inactive for six weeks, this is being closed until they become active again - There is no prejudice against re-nomination and any editor may renominate this one at any time. Hog Farm Talk 17:14, 26 February 2022 (UTC)