Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Cretan War (205–200 BC)

Cretan War

 * Previous nominations here, here, here, and here.

Worked on the suggestions made in the last assessment and have added more synonyms for the most frequent words. Kyriakos 01:10, 6 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Support The tone could still use some work, but A-class articles are not supposed to be perfect. I dislike the manner of the citations, however: why, exactly were the changed back to the original format? I find them unnecessarily confusing. Carom 20:18, 6 November 2006 (UTC)


 * There was a discussion some people throught there were too many inline citations for five references. Kyriakos 21:32, 6 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Personally, I think that the current format is both confusing and, aesthetically speaking, rather unappealing. However, I'm not going to object over it, and if the weight of opinion is on the side of the current form, I won't complain any further. Carom 21:49, 6 November 2006 (UTC)


 * There was a request for these changes. Wandalstouring 15:48, 7 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Support Wandalstouring 15:48, 7 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Oppose There is some poor phrasing and/or punctuation:
 * It also led to an Aetolian defection and invasion, which was suppressed by Philip and Macedon's Greek allies, the Achean League, defecting to Rome and Philip's defeat in the Second Macedonian War.
 * This is also a bit confusing and definitely needs re-wording, otherwise it may come across as a bit comical:
 * While Philip was walking around Abydos, he saw people killing themselves and their families through stabbing, burning, hanging, and jumping down wells and rooftops. Philip was surprised to see this and he published a proclamation announcing that "he gave three days' grace to those who wished to hang or stab themselves."
 * What is confusing about this bit. Kyriakos 09:34, 9 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Thers are still some typos and spelling mistakes. It needs a careful re-read - many sentences are too verbose,
 * Philip saw that Pergamum was undermanned and he advanced with his army and started besieging the city.
 * others are missing words eg:
 * With the treaty concluded, Philip's army then began their assault Ptolemy's territories in Thrace.
 * Before the King of Pergamum, Attalus, set out to campaign had added additional strength to the city walls.
 * I don't think the satelite picture of the region adds anything to the article. Raymond Palmer 02:53, 9 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Weak Support I power read the entire thing in about five minutes. What I saw looked good: nice sources, good images, etc, but I am with holding my full support until I can find the time the read the entire article with my history/wikipedia-critical eyes, rather than my 11:18 PM Oh-my-God-why-did-I-put-off-studying-for-this-exam-until-the-last-minute eyes. :O TomStar81 (Talk)