Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Greco–Persian Wars


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Greco–Persian Wars
Assessing the article for WP:GREECE I saw a paradox. The article passed in 2006 an A-Class review, but then (in the same month!) failed GA review! I think that it should be reassessed by the project, in order to see whether this paradox (a WP:MILHIST projet A-Class article to have failed GA review) should remain or not.--Yannismarou (talk) 07:19, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Initial nomination

These are some things I saw. I will give it a more thorough look over later or tomorrow. JonCatalan (talk) 14:28, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Comments -
 * 1) The lead seems short, and should probably be expanded to at least two paragraphs (apart from the guideline to have one sentence per section).
 * 2) A few of the footnotes should be grouped.
 * 3) I don't like the tables in the forces section, and I think the forces should be written out.  Perhaps provide a table (laid out horizontally to save scrolling and huge white spaces) for a visual reference.
 * 4) Under the Peace of Callias, I think the treaty terms should be provided in paragraph form.  It seems unprofessional to me, but I may be wrong.
 * 5) The article probably needs a thorough copy edit, but I'm not the best person to judge!


 * Comment eliminate all unsourced material that was inserted since the A-class review. Wandalstouring (talk) 10:03, 14 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Comment. Agree with the above comments.  Some paragraphs don't have citations and the lead seems to be too short. Cla68 (talk) 03:33, 18 June 2008 (UTC)


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