Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Isaac Komnenos (son of Alexios I)

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Isaac Komnenos (son of Alexios I)
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 * Nominator(s): 

Isaac was a colourful character: a younger prince who wanted to be emperor, but was always thwarted, forcing him into exile and wanderings across the Middle East. He passed on his ambition to his son, Andronikos I Komnenos, with fatal consequences for the Komnenian dynasty. The article was rewritten, practically from scratch, in 2018, and passed GA shortly after. I think it is as comprehensive as it can be, and would like to eventually nominate it for FA as well. Constantine  ✍  15:08, 7 January 2023 (UTC)

Support Comments from Iazyges
Will take a look soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  15:31, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
 * but ultimately in vain reads somewhat awkward to me, suggest removing the but or changing to which was ultimately in vain
 * Done.


 * During the struggle for John's succession in 1143 perhaps During the succession struggle that followed John's death in 1143
 * Done.


 * In 1150, weakened by the onset of an illness, he was forced to retire from public life by Manuel in the interest of not having two of the three lede paragraphs start with "in [year]", perhaps Weakened by the onset of an illness, he was forced to retire from public life by Manuel in 1150.
 * Done.


 * That's all I have; well done as always. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  03:13, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your time and the good suggestions, ! Constantine  ✍  16:53, 14 January 2023 (UTC)
 * No problem, happy to support. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  18:01, 14 January 2023 (UTC)

As this does not seem to attract much interest—admittedly its 'military' content is sparse—I would like to withdraw its nomination. Constantine  ✍  17:11, 19 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Done. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:22, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you, Gog the Mild Constantine  ✍  17:23, 19 February 2023 (UTC)