Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/SMS Lützow


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SMS Lützow

 * Promoted --Eurocopter (talk) 08:07, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Nominator(s): Parsecboy (talk)

Here's the last of the three Derfflinger-class battlecruisers to grace the hallowed MILHIST A-class review page. This article was rewritten over the past few months and passed GA in mid-August. Hopefully the comments and suggestions that come here will help smooth out the eventual FAC for this article. Thanks in advance to all reviewers! Parsecboy (talk) 21:16, 8 September 2009 (UTC)

Comment - references, dabs, external links and alt text look okay. — Ed   (Talk  •  Contribs)  03:20, 9 September 2009 (UTC)

Support — Ed   (Talk  •  Contribs)  03:20, 9 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Support. It'd be nice if you could say who hit her when the smokescreen was being laid. – Joe   N  21:12, 12 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Support You might clarify the exact nature of the hits that caused her to take on so much water. Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:08, 14 September 2009 (UTC)


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