Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Submarine

Submarine
Submitting pre-review A-Class article for consideration; no opinion on its quality. Kirill Lokshin 01:22, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Oppose Organization has gotten better since I last read the article, but I feel that it can be better improved on. Also, the inline citations are noticably lacking for an article that tops out at 70 kilobytes. TomStar81 (Talk) 05:26, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Oppose agree with everything TomStar81 has written above. The article is very well written, it just needs many more citations and a more logical organization.  Might be better to move the history up a bit.  Also, it just does not read right to have modern civilian subs as the first paragraph after the intro. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Looper5920 (talk • contribs)


 * Oppose Needs Citations Raymond Palmer 17:03, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Why is there no mention of the legendary Yellow Submarine, with which the Fab Four bravely defended Pepperland from the Blue Meanies?! I don't think the article can be complete without at least a 20kb section on this venerable fighting machine! ;-) --kingboyk 13:12, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Oppose, inline citations lacking, cite web format needed, and the external links section needs pruning. Tito xd (?!?) 19:34, 17 September 2006 (UTC)