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17th Airborne Division
I have been working on this article for the past two weeks or so, and I believe I have it at a stage where it can be peer-reviewed and possibly graded for B-Class status. Any comments would be greatly appreciated. Skinny87 (talk) 22:17, 11 May 2008 (UTC)

Kirill Lokshin
A few things that could be improved: Overall, though, quite a nice article. Kirill (prof) 02:31, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * The lead ought to be lengthened to two/three full paragraphs. ✅
 * There's no need for an "Activation" sub-section when there's nothing else in the "Formation" section. ✅ Skinny87 (talk) 08:24, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't think the pulled-out "See also" links add anything. Using details there might be defensible, but those articles aren't really see-also ones. ✅ Thanks for that, I just thought they looked snazzy, but I'm still learning! Skinny87 (talk) 08:24, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * "Disactivation"? Not "Deactivation"? ✅ Teach me to edit last thing at night :) Skinny87 (talk) 08:24, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Dates should be linked as Month Day or Month Day Year, not as Month Day Year. ✅ Skinny87 (talk) 08:27, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

Buckshot06
Quick note: where is Camp Myles Standish? Buckshot06 (talk) 03:51, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * I have no idea! Let me look around for the location and I'll add it in! Skinny87 (talk) 08:24, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Found it! It's in (or was) Taunton, Massachusetts. Added to the article ✅ Skinny87 (talk) 15:59, 12 May 2008 (UTC)