Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/5th Army (Russia)

5th Army (Soviet Union)
Another article on a Soviet field army that's nearly ready to be upgraded. Appreciate comments on what needs to be done for this to reach A-class status. Buckshot06 (talk) 01:30, 24 February 2008 (UTC)

Carom
A few comments:


 * The lead needs to be expanded, I think. It should really provide both an overview of, and an introduction to, the rest of the article.


 * Unless you have strong philosophical objections, there should really be an infobox.
 * Something I realised just after I set the peer review request up - I'll put one in. Buckshot06 (talk) 04:11, 24 February 2008 (UTC)


 * I would perhaps either incorporate the order of battle directly into the text, or move it so that is less visually disruptive.


 * You might want to adopt a more conventional Notes-References-External links format, but that's somewhat of a personal preference.


 * Any images available? They would certainly be nice additions.

Hopefully these comments are helpful. Carom (talk) 02:17, 24 February 2008 (UTC)