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Arado Ar E.381
I think this article is now ready for peer review, since I have taken it to B-class, and am wishing to be able to make content additions and edit the prose and I would like other editors to help me. AirplanePro RadioChecklist 00:18, 30 July 2010 (UTC)

Nick-D
This is a very interesting article. My suggestions for further development are:
 * "In the end of the war" is a bit vague - can you provide an approximate date?
 * Do you think it's all right now?


 * The article could do with a copy edit
 * listed with the requests page at WP:GOCE


 * It would be interesting if the article discussed how it was intended to employ the aircraft in combat, and the feasibility of these plans - am I right in thinking that it was to be launched as a stand-off weapon from other aircraft? (which of course means that it was highly vulnerable to these carrier aircraft being attacked)
 * Similarly, the article should identify why the project was cancelled (presumably as it proved impractical). Nick-D (talk) 01:58, 1 August 2010 (UTC)

Buckshot06

 * There needs to be some description of the test flights and how they went; test pilots; problems/changes/solutions, and if possible some of the connected politicking. Buckshot06 (talk) 10:08, 5 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't have sources. WikiCopter RadioChecklist 01:19, 7 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Also much much more detail about how and why the project was cancelled; what were the resources diverted to? Buckshot06 (talk) 10:10, 5 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Same here. WikiCopter RadioChecklist 01:19, 7 August 2010 (UTC)