Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle for Henderson Field

Battle for Henderson Field
Respectfully request a peer review on this article that I've been working on for some time. I appreciate anyone's comments and/or suggestions. Cla68 12:28, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Kirill Lokshin
Excellent article, as usual. A few specific points: Overall, though, this is basically ready for FAC, I think. Kirill 16:12, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Are there any useful statistics on the numbers of wounded?
 * I'd suggest using blockquote formatting instead of cquote.
 * The page ranges in the footnotes should use en-dashes instead of hyphens. (Horribly nitpicky, I know.)


 * Thank you for the helpful comments you provide in spite of your busy schedule, as always. Cla68 23:18, 3 September 2007 (UTC)