Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle of Dak To

Battle of Dak To
Have made extensive modifications to this article and am looking for constructive criticism. RM Gillespie 20:53, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Kirill Lokshin
Another excellent article. A few minor points that need some attention: Overall, though, this is fully up to your usual standards. Kirill 21:25, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * The lead ought to be expanded to two/three full paragraphs; as it stands, it doesn't really summarize the article.
 * The map of the II Corps Tactical Zone should probably be pushed a few paragraphs down, so as to avoid squeezing text between it and the infobox.
 * There's probably little need for an explicit "more details" link for Giap; it's not really a sub-article, and the link is present in the text.
 * The extended quotes in blockquote formatting don't need quotation marks.