Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle of Ramillies

Battle of Ramillies
Request comments etc for this article. Thank you Raymond Palmer 16:36, 24 July 2007 (UTC)

Kirill Lokshin
Another great article; a few minor points that struck me as warranting improvent: Overall, though, this is excellently written. Kirill 03:11, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
 * "Marlburian", while technically correct, is a bizarre enough form that I'd suggest avoiding it.
 * The sub-section titles under the "Battle" section would be better off as purely geographic; explicitly listing everything according to its position in the Allied line is neither necessary nor particularly impartial.
 * Some of the longer quotes may work better in blockquote formatting.

Victor Falk

 * Excellent... "pontoon train" should be linked to Pontoon_bridge... --Victor falk 17:42, 27 July 2007 (UTC)


 * Thanks to you both. I have made the changes, although on Kirill's last point I have compromised somewhat. The long quotation I think may have been a problem I have reduced by half. I think it's an improvement. Raymond Palmer 19:15, 2 August 2007 (UTC)