Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle of Tskhinvali

Battle of Tskhinvali
The article has been considerably expanded and rewritten. There are very few people commenting and giving feedback on the talk page, so I'd like to get more opinions. I'm especially interested in hearing how readable the article is. Is it interestingly written or is it boring? Is it clear or confusing? Is the language use good enough? Is some essential information missing? Offliner (talk) 20:54, 29 December 2009 (UTC)

Wandalstouring

 * What's a MIA?


 * This war is noteable for its political implications. You should mention the different POV of other countries. Wandalstouring (talk) 11:24, 2 January 2010 (UTC)


 * In the infobox, MIA means "missing in action." I have clarified this. The POV issues are discussed at length in the main war article (2008 South Ossetia war). It was a a conscious decision to let Battle of Tskhinvali focus on the military action, leaving the responsibility and casus belli discussions to the main article. Remember that this article is about a specific battle and not about the war as a whole. Thank you for your feedback. More feedback would be appreciated. Offliner (talk) 12:10, 2 January 2010 (UTC)