Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Cristovão da Gama

Cristovão da Gama
Although listed to be graded, none has been performed yet. Still, a fascinating personage who has been described by one historian (I'm trying to remember who) as "the last of the Crusaders". While I have no illusions this will reach FA status without some help, I'd still like some input. -- llywrch 23:03, 11 June 2006 (UTC)

Kirill Lokshin
Fascinating stuff, and very well written. Aside from the generic suggestion to add in any more material that's available—which may not be much—there are a few more technical suggestions: Overall, though, it's a very good article. Kirill Lokshin 23:15, 11 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Adding Infobox Military Person would be helpful here.
 * Are there any good images (not necessarily of him) to use? A map of the region might be handy, but it may be problematic to find one relevant to the period in question.
 * Separating the footnotes from an alphabetical reference list may be useful.
 * Not directly related to this article, but it would be nice to have some more of the redlinks become stubs, at the least.


 * There is an image of his signature that I uploaded to commons some months ago -- would that help? (Images are almost always the weaknesses of my articles.) -- llywrch 01:46, 12 June 2006 (UTC)


 * I suppose it's better than nothing ;-) Kirill Lokshin 02:24, 12 June 2006 (UTC)

Grafikm_fr
I'll just add a single comment: It would be nice to get inline citations in the conformity with cite.php by using tags. -- Grafikm  (AutoGRAF)  20:50, 14 July 2006 (UTC)