Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Cyprus Navy and Marine Police

Cyprus Navy and Marine Police
Reason for recommendation:

I have done extensive research in making this article and would like to request that it be assigned to an appropriate task force, and also request comments on improving it. many thanks for any help you can provide.

Copperhead331 (talk) 23:35, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Skinny87

 * It needs a lead, per the tag
 * The Overview section could do with an expansion
 * When stating the sizes of various weapons, templates should be used - Template:Convert, I think
 * 'Combat History 1974' - I would suggest changing this to a general 'Combat History' or even just 'Operational History section'
 * Cyprus Navy vessels in 1964-1974 - any particular reason some of the boats listed here have Nazi Germany flags next to them?
 * Image:Cyboat3.jpg - I know next to nothing about images, but what is this based off of, exactly? A photo? Do we not have an image of a real boat, not a drawing?
 * Developments from 1975 to 2008 - these should be merged into a couple of paragraphs and expanded upon if posasible, they're almost list-like at the moment
 * Developments Since 1974 - The same for this section

Good article so far, though! Skinny87 (talk) 15:15, 6 December 2008 (UTC)