Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Operation Gibraltar

Operation Gibraltar
I feel this operation was very significant in terms of the Indo-Pak conflicts as it was the one that was responsible for the Second Kashmir War of '65. I have made every attempt to write this article from a NPOV and in doing so have used sources entirely from Pakistani authors and a few from neutral sites (Interestingly none from Indian authors) to produce an unbiased historical account of the war. I haven't included a battlebox since this isn't a battle by traditional definition, but any inputs will be appreciated. Tx --Idleguy 17:37, 23 July 2006 (UTC)

Kirill Lokshin
Nice. A few suggestions: Overall, quite a nice article. Kirill Lokshin 18:36, 23 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Adding more footnotes is always a good idea.
 * A map of the regions mentioned, perhaps?
 * More details on the Indian military movements would be nice. Is this something that's available?
 * I would go ahead and add a (partial) battlebox, as the article does discuss combat operations. Most of the fields should be pretty usable here.
 * Expand the lead out to two or three paragraphs.


 * Completed a few tasks like maps, expanded lead and battlebox addition. military movement details are hard to obtain but i'll see what i can do. --Idleguy 10:18, 24 July 2006 (UTC)

Miborovsky
--  Миборовский  00:21, 25 July 2006 (UTC)
 * 1) Find a nicer (more professional-looking) map for the infobox, if possible.
 * 2) Article is rather short.
 * 3) Article lacks pictures.