Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Operation Menu

Operation Menu
Just rounding this one off. See what you think. RM Gillespie 21:28, 14 March 2007 (UTC)

Kirill Lokshin
Nice article. A few points to work on, though: Kirill Lokshin 22:24, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
 * The lead should be lengthened considerably, to around three full paragraphs; as it is, it doesn't really provide a good summary of the article as a whole.
 * Are there any other good images available? At the least, a map of the region would be useful; and some portraits of the major figures involved (which should be conveniently public domain) might be nice as well.
 * The ending (particularly the "Cambodia was on the slippery slope to genocide" bit) seems a little too melodramatic. I would try for something a bit drier in tone, and avoid getting drawn off on the Khmer Rouge tangent too much here.


 * Once again, thanks Kirill. Followed your suggestions and made some changes. RM Gillespie 15:55, 17 March 2007 (UTC)