Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Paul Nobuo Tatsuguchi

Paul Nobuo Tatsuguchi
It's been more than two years since I tried to really develop a biography article, so, I could really use another set of eyes to ensure I'm doing this correctly. I discovered this story recently while doing Pacific War research and thought that it was a very interesting story. Any comments and critiques are greatly appreciated. Cla68 (talk) 05:29, 8 May 2008 (UTC)

Ryan4314
Otherwise, sweet lead. Ryan 4314  (talk) 19:35, 10 May 2008 (UTC)
 * You can probably drop the "(US)" after the United States.

Kirill Lokshin
Very good, overall, but a couple of minor things that need fixing: Other than that, this looks ready to go. Kirill (prof) 03:30, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
 * In quotes, editorial comments (e.g. "sic") are normally given in square brackets, not parentheses. Is there some reason for the different usage here?
 * Extended quotes are sometimes cited at the end of the introductory statement and other times at the end of the quote itself; I'd suggest using a single style.


 * Corrections made. Thank you both for taking the time to review the article and leave comments. Cla68 (talk) 13:06, 11 May 2008 (UTC)