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Percy Herbert Cherry
I have significantly edited and improved this article recently, and was seeking any ideas and suggestions for improvement. I have nominated it for GA, and am currently waiting for a willing editor to review it and asertain whether it meets the GA criteria. In the mean time, I have decided to conduct a peer review. Any and all comments welcome. Thanks in advance, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 12:05, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

Woody
Looking very good. A few comments:
 * ...became a complete all-rounder; all-rounder at what exactly?
 * Basicly, he was involved in several activities/groups and excelled at most, if not all, of them. However, as others have been confused over this confusion, I have removed it from the article. Abraham, B.S. (talk) 15:28, 27 September 2008 (UTC)


 * 03:00 on the 2 March, don't need "the"
 * Fixed. Abraham, B.S. (talk) 15:28, 27 September 2008 (UTC)


 * In the notes, ammended should be amended.
 * Fixed. Abraham, B.S. (talk) 15:28, 27 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Other than that, struggling to find issues; it is looking very good indeed, reads well to me, images are all properly licensed, all topics well-cited: well done. Woody (talk) 14:54, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for having a look, mate. Abraham, B.S. (talk) 15:28, 27 September 2008 (UTC)