Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/S-300 (missile)

S-300
The article has gone through a lot of changes over the past few weeks and has really grown. I think it can get Good article status with some work, so hence this request for peer review. - Dammit 17:57, 21 July 2006 (UTC)

Kirill Lokshin
Quite a nice article. Some general suggestions: Overall, though, the material looks quite good. Kirill Lokshin 05:09, 22 July 2006 (UTC)
 * More footnotes are always helpful. This is particularly important for articles such as this one, which have a lot of statistics one might wish to verify.
 * The bulleted lists in every section are excessive. I would rewrite them into regular prose; otherwise, the article looks too choppy.
 * Some general condensing of the shorter sections into more substantial contiguous blocks might be helpful. Again, you want to fight the impression of list- or table-heaviness in an article.
 * I've written the bulleted lists into prose, but what do you mean with condensing of the shorter sections into more substantial contiguous blocks, could you give an example? - Dammit 11:11, 23 July 2006 (UTC)
 * It's an issue that's mostly gone away now that the lists are gone. There are still some very short sections (e.g. "S-300PMU"), though; I don't know how important it is that each variant get its own section, but if multiple ones can be grouped together, it would create less choppy prose. Kirill Lokshin 15:07, 23 July 2006 (UTC)
 * I've tried to work away those, but I'm not exactly convinced it looks better this way. It seems a bit harder to find information about specific subversions now, but that might just be my inexperience. - Dammit 19:36, 25 July 2006 (UTC)