Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Sissi (Finnish guerrilla)

Creidiki
Article has been re-structured, content and refenrences added, comments please.Creidiki (talk) 06:38, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

Please see if this article meets B-class criteria or tell what it needs to be promoted Creidiki (talk) 21:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

Blnguyen
It would probably need a lead which is at least more than one sentence, and it would also need references throughout the article generally. And the references should be filled out with publisher details, author details and so forth. Do you know how this works.?  Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 08:37, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
 * I've done up one of the citations as an example.  Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 05:36, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

The article also needs a copyedit in some places. Some of the short 1-2 sentence paras will need to be merged.
 * "Sissi troops are trained in: Pohjois-Karjalan Prikaati, Kainuun Prikaati, Jääkäriprikaati"
 * Are these training courses or the locations of the army bases

More sources that are independent of the FDF are preferable. Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 05:36, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

FayssalF
As per Blnguyen. The "introduction" section has been moved to form a lead in order to establish context. Some citaions are needed as well. As for content, it would be a good idea to have a section dedicated to operations in which the unit has participated. -- FayssalF  -  Wiki me up®  16:10, 17 December 2007 (UTC)