Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Tower of St. Olav

Tower of St. Olav
The author of the article (not me) would like to have this article peer reviewed and edited, as he does not feel his competence in English was high enough to produce the article of acceptable quality. Any help with bringing this article up to standards would be greatly appreciated.—Ëzhiki (Igels Hérissonovich Ïzhakoff-Amursky) • (yo?); 16:10, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Kirill Lokshin
The article obviously needs some heavy copyediting to smooth out the language; I'll try to pitch in a bit if I have some free time, but this could just as easily be done by any editor—most of the article can be cleaned up without having any knowledge of the topic.

More generally, I'm wondering if it makes sense to keep this as a separate article from Vyborg Castle. Looking at the Russian articles for both topics, I don't get the sense that there's a lot of material on the castle that doesn't touch upon the tower, and vice versa. I would therefore lean towards merging the two articles; we are better served with one very good article than with two decent ones, I think. Kirill [talk] [pf] 15:21, 19 September 2009 (UTC)