Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/USS Mercy (AH-4)

[[USS Mercy (AH-4)|USS ''Mercy'' (AH-4)]]
I would like to see what areas need to be worked on to get this to A-class. Also, is there enough substance to think about FA-class? — Bellhalla (talk) 23:21, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
 * If the incomplete USS Illinois (BB-65) can get to FA-class then this surely can too, its just an issue of getting all your ducks in a row. I'll take a look after dinner and offer suggestions for improvement then. TomStar81 (Talk) 01:52, 16 May 2008 (UTC)

Kirill Lokshin
Quite nice, overall; but a few things that might be improved: Kirill (prof) 01:51, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
 * The single sub-sections aren't really the best thing to have.
 * The listing of notable passengers might work better in a box of some sort, rather than as a rump section.
 * The image with the footnotes essentially turns it into a three-column layout, which is somewhat cramped on smaller resolutions.


 * Responses, in order:
 * Easily removed. (see item below, also)
 * I can easily prose-ify the notable passengers (and eliminate the section heading in the process)
 * Good point. I'll remove an image so that doesn't happen.
 * Thanks for taking time to do all the reviews that you do, Kirill. — Bellhalla (talk) 14:59, 5 June 2008 (UTC)