Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/USS Missouri (BB-63)

USS Missouri (BB-63)
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By accidentall oversight its been more than two years since this article has seen any type of community attention, so I am submitting this article for Peer Review ahead of a needed FAR to address any issues that may need to be fixed. TomStar81 (Talk) 22:39, 28 January 2009 (UTC)

Patar knight
Alright, pretty good article. Couple of minor suggestions:


 * In the introduction, US Navy and United States Navy are redundant. The first could be removed, and the second linked.


 * In the "Service with the 3rd Fleet, Admiral Halsey" section, 2nd paragraph, the first link to Honshu is in a better position to be linked then the second one.


 * In "Signing of the Japanese Instrument of Surrender", the first link to Honshu could be linked.


 * Redirect Navy Day in the Post-war section to the correct sub-section.


 * In the same section, "both nations' independence.[4]" doesn't seem to refer to two nations at all. I'm guessing that it's referring to Greece and Turkey?


 * In the Korean section the "Republic of Korea." is not previously mentioned, and could lead to confusion among readers


 * "In an effort to dissuade U.N. forces from completely overrunning North Korea the People's Republic of China", comma after Korea.


 * Same section, Link to Mark Wayne Clark ("sailed thence to Sasebo, Japan. General Mark W. Clark,")

Good job on this article, and good luck on the FAR. --Patar knight - chat/contributions 00:09, 29 January 2009 (UTC)