Wikipedia:WikiProject Music/Noticeboard/Old/Help

= Music-related articles in need of help =

Unknown music genre
I am looking of a definition of a music/song genre, a kind of "urban musical folklore". Its distinctive feature is that it is related with a specific modern profession or occupation. (I say "modern", to distinguish the most obvious example of "cowboy songs" of country music). These songs usually target a particular professional audience, heavyly loaded with professional slang and humor.

Some examples:

The latter one goes something like,
 * Les Horribles Cernettes, "the one and only High Energy Rock Band" from CERN.
 * Filk music
 * The one I am particularty interested and trying to look up. In late 1960s or early 1970s, IBM released an LP full of parodies of pop songs with context related to computers. I remember two of them:
 * Press the Magic Button
 * Memory D'Amour (a pun on Melodie D'Amour by The Ames Brothers)
 * I've bought a terminal
 * The day I lost my gal
 * ... etc.
 * Now I have girls galore
 * I my new mem'ry core
 * I put them on disk file
 * To store them for a while... etc.
 * Refrain:
 * Memory d'amour,
 * Put the core to the printer
 * Or to the display
 * Please without delay.

I'd very much like to see two things: the article about the genre and the info about this IBM music. Surprisingly, I cannot find its traces in the internet. mikka (t) 20:25, 8 September 2005 (UTC)

Technical help needed
Would someone with a background in technical music writing please take a look at Talk:Dixie (song)? The source I used to write most of the main "Dixie (song)" article gives a quite technical description of the song, which flies right over my head. I've bulleted the points he makes on the talk page in the hopes that someone who understands his terminology will translate into common English and determine whether any of it deserves inclusion in the main article. Thanks! BrianSmithson 15:57, 22 October 2005 (UTC)

Peer comments on Tool (band)
Hi folks, I would like to ask you a favor: I have been working on the Tool article for almost a year now and would like to pass it on to Peer review pretty soon. Before doing so, I would be interested in any qualified comments by co-editors who have already written good or featured articles in the same field. Like I said, any comments are welcome. Of course, if anyone is interested for my comments in exchange, I'd be more then glad to help out. Best wishes. --Johnnyw 19:33, 14 April 2006 (UTC)


 * That's a pretty... complete... article there. I haven't had a chance to go through the whole thing yet, but my initial reaction is that the intro is way too big and rather messy to read. It's one of the dangers of good citations, I'd be willing to bet. I'd move to have the intro cut down to the basics and move the important citations to the body of the article in some fashion, but that's an initial reaction; I'll give it a proper read later. Xinit 23:43, 18 May 2006 (UTC)

In need of some assisatnce - Lists
I am almost finished fixing the naming conventions on the List of songs about drugs page, and have found similar musical lists which need fixing in the same way and don't think I can do it on my own as I may go crazy. If anyone would like to help me then I'd be very thankful. I'm asking this here because people involved in this WikiProject will be more likely to know how to make the needed changes. Here's the pages I have in mind so far (and what needs to be done):


 * List of songs about tequila (italics need changed to quote marks around songs)
 * Done. Took two seconds to change the italics to quotes, and a few more seconds to check the diff.  Λυδ α  cιτγ  21:17, 25 June 2006 (UTC)


 * List of songs under one minute in length (quote marks around song names)
 * Done. This one took a lot longer because of the varying formats.  Λυδ α  cιτγ  23:16, 27 June 2006 (UTC)


 * List of songs over fifteen minutes in length (removal of excessive linking - a lot of entries link to the band name, even though they are in a section which the name links there already)
 * Done.  Λυδ α  cιτγ  19:50, 28 July 2006 (UTC)


 * List of Halloween songs (quote marks around song names)
 * Done.  Λυδ α  cιτγ  04:43, 8 July 2006 (UTC)


 * List of Christmas number one singles (quote marks)
 * Done. The articles pertaining to it could use some work, its not very through. CraigP 02:20, 13 July 2006 (UTC)


 * List of songs about Manchester (quote marks)
 * Done.  Λυδ α  cιτγ  16:31, 13 July 2006 (UTC)


 * List of songs about Omaha, Nebraska (quote marks, and perhaps changing around of the artist and song name)
 * Done. Didn't change around the names, though - I can if it makes sense.  Λυδ α  cιτγ  16:31, 13 July 2006 (UTC)


 * List of patriotic songs (quote marks again)
 * Done.  Λυδ α  cιτγ  23:39, 16 July 2006 (UTC)


 * List of songs about World War II (quote marks, this is a bit shorter than the others)
 * Done. CraigP 02:30, 13 July 2006 (UTC)


 * List of Beatles songs by singer (quote marks)
 * Done.  Λυδ α  cιτγ  02:51, 25 July 2006 (UTC)

I also need a second opinion on the List of songs about drugs article about changing all the — marks to "by". Aa you can see, it's a lot of work to be done and I'm sure there are more lists that also need work. I severly doubt I can do this alone. Tartan 16:26, 25 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Do you have Firefox? If so, use User:Cacycle/editor - it'll save you a ton of time. I'll get started on the simple search-and-replace stuff.  Λυδ α  cιτγ  21:03, 25 June 2006 (UTC)


 * I don't. I'm not even sure what that is (the Cacyle thing)... *laughs nervously* Tartan 21:04, 25 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Replied on your talk page.  Λυδ α  cιτγ  21:20, 25 June 2006 (UTC)

All done! Praise User:Cacycle/editor.  Λυδ α  cιτγ  19:51, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
 * claps* Thanks very much! I haven't been around much to edit over the summer holidays here... it's a very lazy time for me. Tartan 13:10, 1 August 2006 (UTC)

Pink Fairies
needs NPOVing. JesseW 02:06, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)
 * done MarkBuckles 02:49, 3 August 2006 (UTC)

Schreck ensemble
not clear what needs doing. Is it good enough already? JesseW 02:36, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)
 * Was in terrible shape. Did a big overhaul. MarkBuckles 10:31, 25 July 2006 (UTC)

Sanguma
rewrite JesseW 02:36, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)
 * done MarkBuckles 02:49, 3 August 2006 (UTC)

Little Roger and the Goosebumps
unformatted JesseW 02:36, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)
 * Completed MarkBuckles 02:54, 3 August 2006 (UTC)

Crisis (band) vs. Crisis (British band)
According to the disambiguation page, the article Crisis (band) should cope with the US heavy metal group, but actually, both Crisis (band) and Crisis (British band) speak of that British punk rock group... Can somebody help? -- ThomasO. 20:58, 26 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Fixed! Check it all over if you like (had to sort out the disambig page as well as the 2 articles) and make any modifications you think are needed. Madder 00:45, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

Hip hop collaborations
contains a ridiculous amount of errors, and I need help converting its code. Please help! --Phantasy Phanatik 09:09, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

Conducting
Everything past the history section is full of POV's and OR. Most of it should probably be deleted. MarkBuckles (talk) 05:33, 4 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Resolved. Much of article has been rewritten. MarkBuckles (talk) 03:46, 19 August 2006 (UTC)

GG Allin
needs POV clean up very badly. Dalf | Talk 20:18, 25 August 2005 (UTC)
 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  02:13, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

American Boychoir School
Need copyedit. It was my first major editing job and it should be reviewed. Thanks. Wangster 18:33, 7 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Has been copyedited.  Λυδ α cιτγ  02:13, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Popular Front (band)
I ran across this article recently. Can someone find out more about the nobility of this band and clean up or mark for CSD/AFD as needed? I would like to but I don't know enough about music to really make a good determination or not. - Hbdragon88 06:36, 19 April 2006 (UTC)
 * Speedy deleted (A7).  Λυδ α cιτγ  02:13, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Touring label
Possible Neologism: Hi! I just noticed the new article touring label, which is not written in a particularly encyclopedic style. At the end of the article, it mentions that the term was coined by G. David Daniels of WCA Entertainment, who also appears to be the author of the article. (User:Ddaniels@wca-entertainment.com). If someone who is familiar with the music industry could glance over the article, and sort out whether it's describing a recognized phenomenon or just promoting WCA Entertainment, it would be great. Thanks! FreplySpang 17:58, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Deleted (Articles for deletion/Touring label).  Λυδ α cιτγ  02:13, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Nuçi's Space
This has had a notability notice almost since I began it, and I'm not sure what else to do. Could folks take a look at it? Suggestions? Aleta 09:23, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
 * Seems like notability has been made clear.  Λυδ α cιτγ  02:13, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Dc Talk
I am trying to get this to Featured Article, and I want some help. Thanks.-- C  J   King  18:27, 27 December 2006 (UTC)
 * Hasn't been edited recently.  Λυδ α cιτγ  02:13, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Linkin Park
I noticed that the band Linkin Park isn't covered under this project. Just thought you guys should know.  S h a r k f a c e  2 1 7  03:25, 25 January 2007 (UTC)

The Ne'er-do-wells
I noticed the above article a week ago and tagged it for notability. In that week the notability tag has been removed and nothing in the way of references added, they've also had one of their songs deleted as non-notable. I've re-added the notability tag because the article only has one active editor and gives the appearance of being "we've got a Myspace page, lets get one on Wikipedia". Could someone from here with a better knowledge of band notability have a look at it and see if it should be marked AFD. Thanks - X201 10:00, 6 February 2007 (UTC)
 * It's up on AFD now. Garion96 (talk) 17:16, 20 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Deleted (Articles for deletion/The Ne'er-do-wells).  Λυδ α cιτγ  02:13, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

==FAC (after a not-very-helpful peer review) but failed due to concerns about the tone of the article. WP:LoCE has a huge backlog, so I'd appreciate it if someone could lend a hand since I've worked on the article to much to be able to take a fresh look at it.  ShadowHalo 15:11, 11 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Copyedited intro. Anyone else want to lend a hand?  Λυδ α cιτγ  00:28, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks for doing a copyedit. Just a note in case anyone else wants to take a look at the article, it may be worth looking at the "Conception and writing" section since the comments at FAC mentioned that.  ShadowHalo 01:45, 13 April 2007 (UTC)

Now a GA, and back at FAC.  Λυδ α cιτγ  17:58, 22 June 2007 (UTC)

List of vital articles
The below are vital articles that should be at least Good Articles, from the List of articles all languages should have (in music and composers and musicians).  Λυδ α  cιτγ  14:45, 25 July 2006 (UTC)
 * B-class. Almost uncited.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
 * B-class. Almost uncited.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Good information and pictures; needs audio.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Good information and pictures; needs audio.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Not wikified; no references.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Not wikified; no references.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)


 * A-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
 * A-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)


 * B-class. Looks close to a GA to me.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
 * B-class. Looks close to a GA to me.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

 Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC) — Completely overhauled between 8 and 26 December 2007. ↔ Dennywuh (talk) 20:21, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Good amount of info, but only 2 references.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Good amount of info, but only 2 references.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Delisted GA for lack of photo.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Delisted GA for lack of photo.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Good amount of info, but only 3 sources.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Good amount of info, but only 3 sources.  Λυδ α cιτγ  03:44, 5 April 2007 (UTC)


 * B-class; lots of sources, but not enough inline citations.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * B-class; lots of sources, but not enough inline citations.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Start-class; almost no biography.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Start-class; almost no biography.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Start-class; almost no biography.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Start-class; almost no biography.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:17, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Former FA; failed GA.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Former FA; failed GA.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Good info; few citations.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Good info; few citations.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Too short; uncited.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Too short; uncited.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Lots of info; few inline citations.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Lots of info; few inline citations.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * B-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Inline citations needed to get to GA.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Inline citations needed to get to GA.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Lots of info; few references.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Lots of info; few references.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Close to a GA.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Close to a GA.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Lots of info; few references.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Lots of info; few references.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Start-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Start-class.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Not in good shape.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Not in good shape.  Λυδ α cιτγ  01:55, 6 April 2007 (UTC)