Wikipedia:WikiProject Novels/Peer review/Master of the Game

Master of the Game
I've done a considerable amount of work on this article, and felt that it was ready for a review. I am sure that after a few more weeks, it'll be ready for a GA or an FA. -- Kzrulzuall  Talk • Contribs 23:47, 12 May 2007 (UTC)

Some basic suggestions
First I would say this is an article that is showing a lot of improvements, so good work here. For further work I would suggest looking at our article template and then having a go at the following. How about those for a start. :: Kevinalewis  : (Talk Page) /(Desk)  07:56, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Adding anything you can find more to demonstate notability
 * Put in a section on any form of critical comment, reviews etc.
 * separate out the "historical" and "cultural" references.
 * the image used should ideally be of "slightly" better quality and also ideally a "first edition" I know of no reason why a later edition would be more notable, unless you do.
 * remove the blurb (likely copyright voilation).
 * add a "Plot introduction" which introduce the basics of the Plot but without any spoiler material.
 * I've changed the image to a first edition one, removed the blurb, deleted the cultural reference as there is hardly any, and added a short plot introduction into the lead. As for the critical reviews, I am pretty sure that NYT has some, as it is a reasonably well known book... -- Kzrulzuall  Talk • Contribs 09:51, 22 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 23:58, 17 May 2007 (UTC)