Wikipedia:WikiProject Television/The X-Files task force/A-Class review/The Unnatural (The X-Files)/2

The Unnatural (The X-Files)

 * Nominator(s): Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:04, 18 November 2012 (UTC)

I am re-nominating this for A-Class because I would like to promote it to FA. Please have a look over it and tell me if it needs anything else. Gen. Quon  (Talk)   00:04, 18 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * "a towering foul ball" -> Probably baseball jargon, can we just explain why it's impressive? He hits it far/fast/accurately etc.
 * Why is Martin not mentioned at the first instance of his character's name?
 * "In the present day" -> it's 1999, not 2024.
 * "he purposely plays badly" -> I'd use "deliberately"
 * "and puns the phrase, "In the beginning"" -> I've never seen "pun" used as a verb; perhaps "and acts as a pun on the phrase "in the beginning"."?
 * "a character whom had appeared" -> I believe this should just be "who"
 * I wonder if the block quote might be better put to use as a quote box instead
 * When you first mention Mark Snow, note that he's the composer for the series, rather than just this episode
 * Ref 13 cites a page range and needs to use "pp.", not "p."
 * I believe it was Crisco who pointed it out to me before but I'm not convinced Starpulse is reliable.


 * I think that's all I've got. GRAPPLE   X  05:23, 19 November 2012 (UTC)
 * There we go. How's it look now?-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   21:32, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Made a few minor changes to homogenise the article with the other FAs (keeping the quote box colour the same). Support in light of the changes. GRAPPLE   X  22:42, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Support TBrandley 03:47, 22 November 2012 (UTC)