Wikipedia:WikiProject Tropical cyclones/Assessment/Tropical Storm Lee (2005)

Archived discussion. Current status: 

Meets my FAC criteria.--Nilfanion (talk) 18:55, 17 October 2006 (UTC)
 * Well, after the HURDAT reference is formatted with cite web, sure. Tito xd (?!?) 05:53, 19 October 2006 (UTC)
 * sofixit ;) Besides we have a three man rule... Hink stop procrastinating and give in already!--Nilfanion (talk) 11:41, 19 October 2006 (UTC)

OK, here's my review. It's certainly GA class, but I'm not convinced it's completely comprehensive (though it's close). The storm history, for example, could probably be expanded. Is there any more info before it developed into a TD (like TWO's)? The article suddenly goes from it forming to it degenerating to a remnant low a day later. Was there anything going on between the first advisory and when it became a remnant low? "...then turned to the northeast due to the effects of a non-tropical system". What affects? Was it an upper level low whose large circulation drawed it northeastward, a trough of low pressure, an extratropical storm? When it redeveloped convection, was it due to instability of the atmosphere? Less wind shear? Warmer water temps? The whole operational/post-analysis with how long it was a storm should be re-written and clarified a bit. It's bit confusing, and would probably be confusing to someone who doesn't know anything about hurricanes (like if Lee was on the main page and someone read it). The last sentence is a bit of a run-on. When did it become a remnant low? Where did it go after it degenerated into a remnant low? Just reading the storm history without looking at the track map, it's unclear at its motion, so a few locations along the way would be nice. The impact section (or lack thereof) could probably be merged with the Naming and Records, as done with Irene (05). It's good, but I'm opposing A class for now until these things are fixed. Hurricanehink ( talk ) 15:16, 22 October 2006 (UTC)
 * The above still applies. Hurricanehink ( talk ) 04:58, 6 December 2006 (UTC)