Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Brain Challenge

Brain Challenge
The article is more than just a Start class article now. JAF1970 (talk) 20:25, 12 March 2008 (UTC)

dihydrogen monoxide
Hope this helps! dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 08:51, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
 * The image gallery shouldn't really be there...violates some fair use policy etc.
 * Not really, no. These are not of the same platform - it's okay to show the different variations from platform to platform. (See some other older game articles.) JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I've seen plenty of articles for games on numerous consoles (and have written some). It still violates numerous aspects of WP:NFCC to use those, especially as a fair use gallery. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 07:47, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
 * "The game is also structured like Big Brain Academy" - what is the "also" indicating?
 * Was hoping someone would fill that one out. JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
 * The bolding in the Gameplay section isn't needed
 * Um, why? JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Because that's what WP:MOSBOLD says (or, rather, doesn't allow). dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 07:47, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
 * No Game Rankings/Metacritic scores?
 * That can be added. JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
 * You could use more of your own words in Reception rather than just quoting everything
 * Um, no. That's standard in the reception section. JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
 * "game formula[4]," - refs should go after punctuation
 * "was more kind" --> "was more generous", perhaps?
 * Refs need publisher info, accessdate, etc. Try cite web
 * Not for review citations. JAF1970 (talk) 18:59, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Actually, all references should be formatted as well as possible. See WP:FOOTNOTE, amongst other things. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 07:47, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I'd just like to say that I would have appreciated some not-so-bitey comments. I mean, I don't have to review for you. Anyways, I've replied above. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 07:47, 23 March 2008 (UTC)