Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Call of Duty 2

Call of Duty 2
This needs a little bit of cleanup (especially the Multiplayer section, sheesh) and reliable citation. It could also use a little bit more information. I'm sure we could make this top 10 X360 game a FA! (In other words, please review, but more importantly please help!) &mdash; Ilyan  e  p  (Talk)  18:29, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
 * I changed some of the outgoing links as notes to actual inline citations, will convert the rest in a bit here :-) -- light darkness (talk) 18:19, 3 April 2006 (UTC)
 * I changed them to &lt;references /&gt;

Here are some style considerations: I hope you find this useful, Poulsen 07:56, 6 April 2006 (UTC)
 * 1) The reviews section should cite who says what, instead of "some said" and "others say" it would be better to write which magazine/homepage (IGN or what not) represent that view of the game.
 * 2) References should be much more clear, mentioning where they were published and who the author is.
 * 3) The gallery section might be spread out through the article, inserted at points where they are mentioned - that would make a much more compelling article.
 * 4) The external links section should really be weeded out - having a general site like xboxdream.com as a link gives nothing to the article.


 * Thanks. What I've done so far is re-done a few of the references sections in order to include "IGN:..." instead of just "Call of Duty 2 Review". I dispersed the screenshots in the article, and it's a lot less boring this way. I'm about to weed out the external links section. &mdash; Ilyan  e  p  (Talk)  02:48, 15 April 2006 (UTC)