Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Crush 40/Archive1

Crush 40
This article has come a VERY long way from the edge of deletion to where it is now, thanks to Radman622 and myself working hard on it. We've put lots of effort into it, found many citations, and also had it reassessed (though we didn't like the results of the assessment). Since then, I have put even more effort into it, but I'm not sure where to go from here. I would like to have all sections of the article reviewed for this reason, for the purpose of improvement and future reassessment. I'd like to know what more I can do with the article (besides find more material, there's really not that much out there) to possibly make this a Good Article in the future, if there's ever enough content for it to come even close to that level. Redphoenix526 (talk) 02:47, 27 January 2008 (UTC)

EDIT: Let me clarify a little more about the Japanese Wikipedia links. There's no English Wikipedia equivalent of these pages (trust me, I looked). So I translated the pages into English with Google Translator and linked them, because they used to be links in Japanese to ONE of the four people up there. Redphoenix526 (talk) 00:26, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

Just a few points i saw at the first glance:
 * Use reference templates.. looks much better
 * Cut down on the number of links to the japanese wikipedia...
 * Only wikilink each word like "Sega" once or twice (once in the lead then once in the article, not every time the word appears..  Y zm o  talk  12:46, 28 January 2008 (UTC)