Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Doctor N. Gin

Doctor N. Gin
I think this article has improved quite a bit since its initial assessment. It has a very clean layout, and it has a proportionate amount of references, though I am aware that there is not enough outside references for it to become a Good Article as of yet. Nevertheless, I think this article's class should be bumped up a notch at this point. Oh, and we still have to give it a label on the importance scale. Cat&#39;s Tuxedo (talk) 22:34, 23 November 2007 (UTC)

User:Krator
User:Krator (t c) 12:07, 24 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Some of the information in "Conception and creation" should be summarised in the lead section per WP:LS - only his characteristics are currently there.
 * The History section borders gamecruft. Try to merge all subsections into a single one of about three long paragraphs. Also, the section title and layout are confusing - is it a fictional or real-world history. I would suggest to make it the latter, and rename the section "Character Development", and get rid of the "Past History/Present History" subsection thing. Also, what is the reason for the current subdivision in years?
 * Reference 16 is no longer there. Try archive.org to recover it.
 * There is some jargon in the article. Things like "unlockable" and "double-phased mech" should not be in any Wikipedia article.
 * See also "Austria"? Which source says that he's Austrian anyway? Generally, most of the see also section does not make sense in this format. I suggest removing it.
 * The "hpzr.freeweb7.com" source looks incredibly unreliable. Is it?
 * I've just addressed most of the problems, though I'd like to cite a few things. I know Reference 16 can't be accessed from Wikipedia for some reason, but it can still be accessed from the site, so I changed the reference accordingly. And I assure you the hpzr sources are perfectly reliable: the "Deleted content from Twinsanity" reference was posted by an actual employee of Traveller's Tales, and the "Interview with Radical Entertainment is with an actual employee of Radical. Cat&#39;s Tuxedo (talk) 14:09, 24 November 2007 (UTC)