Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Hot Shots Golf (series)

Hot Shots Golf (series)
Hello! I've spent all day working on this article - compiling information and getting graphics etc. I'd basically just like some people to look at it, make suggestions for tidying it up, wikifying other links, figuring out what other comentary to add and where. I want each section to have the same basic layout but right now I have more info for some of the games than others, and I'd like that to get evened out. Just any comments or sugesstions to improve it in ANY way would be great :)

Also, anyone who really knows this series of games could really help out in the info department!

Thanks in advance, Naha|(talk) 01:11, July 13, 2005 (UTC)
 * Just checking back in, haven't had any responses to this yet :( --Naha|(talk) 15:05, July 26, 2005 (UTC)


 * For Hot Shots Golf Fore!, I think you should use less bullet-points, just use prose. Once this has been done, the entry for this game might become quite large and you might want to keep the intro, with... ...above the intro. This could of course be done for all the different games once they get enough information. Then for the individual articles I'd create infoboxes. You could of course create infoboxes within the current article but I think that once a section has an infobox, you might as well make a new article and call it a stub. Besides that I don't know all that much about these games so I can't really help you with the info. If you decide to split the articles off I'll help out. I'd check out the FAQs on GameFAQs to get all the info. Though of course wikipedia is not a game guide. Jacoplane 18:03, 26 July 2005 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I'm going to try to incorporate all your suggestions if/when the individual sections get large enough. I'm going to go ahead and put that one part into paragraph form because it does look better that way.  I appreciate your time :)  --Naha|(talk) 20:25, July 26, 2005 (UTC)