Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Jeff Green (writer)

Jeff Green (writer)
I've only been working on this article for a few days, but it's come a ways from where it was and I think it's about where it needs to be in terms of coverage. I'll be digging through podcasts and blogs to fill out the "Personal life" section, though. Besides the prose itself, I'd like to ask the following about this article:


 * Is the structure fine? Should the "Podcast" section be baked in with everything else?
 * Is the article too much a history of CGW and GFW, and not enough a biography of Jeff Green? I've tried to show his thoughts on the magazine business, and how his job went from being unaffected by the web to his magazine closing because of the web.
 * Are there any spots with POV-ish stuff? I don't believe I've written anything flowery about the guy.

Trying to get this to GA-quality. Any help is appreciated. -- gakon5 (talk) 01:34, 24 October 2009 (UTC)