Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Massively multiplayer online role-playing game/Archive 1

MMORPG
I believe that with a bit of work, this article can easily come up to GA standards. I am aware that is is uncited and I am hoping to find other ways to improve the article in addition to referencing. TIA! Greeves (talk • contribs) 01:42, 24 January 2007 (UTC)
 * Anyone? I could really use some suggestions of ways to improve the article. Greeves (talk • contribs • reviews) 04:18, 6 February 2007 (UTC)
 * The article is 41 kilobytes long, WP:SIZE recommends keeping it below 32k. See if it can be shortened a little, but obviously don't compromise article quality.
 * Prosify those bulleted lists.
 * This is rich, as I have a tendency to do this, but there are too many comments (inside brackets).
 * There seems to be a concentration of images in the top right of the article. See if you can spread them out evenly.
 * Hope this helps, CaptainVindaloo t c e 23:45, 7 February 2007 (UTC)