Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Midtown Madness


 * Archived, comments still welcome if anyone comes across this. —Giggy 10:35, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Midtown Madness
Recently passed GA; now going for FA. There's only so much that can be said on it (I have a magazine request awaiting)... it wasn't that big at the time, despite good reviews. Any comments are welcome. Cheers! —Giggy 14:00, 30 June 2008 (UTC)


 * From thumbing through the article: Pull the white walls off the Infobox image, try to turn the intro paragraphs into a single paragraph and use the compilation review sites to locate a few more reviews. --AeronPrometheus (talk) 07:22, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Fixed the image (thanks for pointing that out!), can't find anymore reliable sources amongst the Game Rankings stuff. —Giggy 07:52, 5 July 2008 (UTC)


 * In fact the second paragraph might be a bit of a run-on. Except for the last sentence, the paragraph is praising the game for its variety of car noises.

Other than the above comments, I suggest a thorough copyedit for prose and flow. Jappalang (talk) 08:32, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your comments! Some stuff done and replied to; the rest I'll get to. —Giggy 07:52, 5 July 2008 (UTC)