Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Neverwinter Nights 2: Storm of Zehir

Neverwinter Nights 2: Storm of Zehir
Working towards getting the article ready for FAC. —  Vantine84 (t – c)    06:18, 4 December 2009 (UTC)

Crimsonfox's Comments


 * DAB Link - Fix this
 * Ref 27 is dead
 * Refs 22 and 36 are inconsistent with their dates
 * Descriptive alt text is needed for the images
 * There's a couple of different styles of showing block quotes. I'm not sure about this, but I think they should be consistent. One uses and the other


 * Lead ideally needs expanding (WP:Lead)
 * "with new features introduced in the game" - "new" or "introduced" is redundant, they both imply the same thing
 * "The rest of the player's party can also be created," - "also" is redundant
 * Sort out any tags - One in the story section
 * Development - "high enough Survival skill " - Does "Survival" need capitalising?
 * Reception 3rd paragraph - There's 3 references which should be after punctuation
 * Reception - "a lukewarm reception." - Not sure about the use of "lukewarm". It wouldn't work if you said "hot reception" so I think it should be reworded.

I hope some of these comments help. I found this at the assessment page so I'll leave a comment there as well that I have reviewed it here.  Cr im so nF ox  talk 22:11, 30 January 2010 (UTC)