Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Rewrite (visual novel)

Rewrite (visual novel)
This peer review discussion has been closed. My reason for requesting a peer review is so that I can attempt to achieve a good topic on Key's visual novels, of which include this article and six others (in Category:Key games) which are all GA, including the company article. It seems it is needed to have an "individual quality audit that includes a completed peer review, with all important problems fixed" for any article not up to GA/FA/FL status. Thanks.--  十  八  04:49, 12 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk) 03:13, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
 * "Rewrite (リライト, Riraito?) is a Japanese visual novel being developed by Key playable on the PC as a DVD." Add that is after PC.
 * Specify what Key is.
 * "However, Na-Ga does provide his assistance assists with computer graphics"
 * "and Romeo Tanaka, notable" use known instead of "notable"
 * Current refs 6 and 7 deadlink.
 * Done, and thanks.--  十  八  04:49, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Good luck at GTC! Dabomb87 (talk) 12:44, 19 September 2008 (UTC)