Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Samus Aran

Samus Aran
I had never played any of the Metroid games (now I'm addicted to Super Metroid :), but one day I bumped into this page, and it impressed me with all the detail and illustration. So, let´s begin the PR... igordebraga ≠ 00:23, 8 September 2005 (UTC)
 * The vast bulk of the article is taken up by the history. This isn't particularly bad, but I think that the whole feminist message dominates the intro, when the article is about the history. Perhaps the "Challenge of gender roles" section should be expanded with the related material in the intro. The intro, in turn, should have a synopsis of the history, but shouldn't be devoid of the gender issue either. HereToHelp 19:00, 17 September 2005 (UTC)
 * I see next to nothing about Samus's power suit in this article; it is literaly just a large biography, with some small stuff at the end. -- gakon5 (talk)