Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Saw (video game)/Archive 1

Saw (video game)
Been editing heavily and wanted to see what I can do to improve the article as I go. I'm not looking for anything specifically, just ways to make it a better article thats on it's way to the next quality level. Thanks, GroundZ3R0 002 (talk) 08:43, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I made some general copy edits to the article, including de-wikilinking common terms and dates. I'd recommend cleanup of the Development section, as it feels disjointed at the moment.  Secondly one of the references loops back to another Wikipedia article.  That's not really the best way to do it, unless that section of the article has references you need - in which case you should use those direct refs rather than linking to another article.  I didn't read over much else as this is very much not my type of game, but hopefully that helps. --Teancum (talk) 13:10, 10 September 2009 (UTC)